tommygirl: (veronica mars)
tommygirl ([personal profile] tommygirl) wrote2005-04-14 10:42 am

a veronica mars drabble

So [livejournal.com profile] fairy_tale_echo and [livejournal.com profile] scribblinlenore issued an interesting Veronica Mars drabble challenge based on this week's episode right here and I felt it necessary to respond.



Logan was in his car, speeding down the highway, before he even realized what he was doing. He was rushing off to save Veronica Mars, the girl who up until a few weeks ago had been his sworn enemy, the girl who he blamed for breaking him and Lilly up. He’d worry about his motivations later, he decided. For the moment, he would focus on the fact that someone was in trouble. He couldn’t save his mother or Lilly, but he would be damned if he lost someone else. Not this time. He glanced at his spedometer, increasing his speed to beat them to the motel.

[identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com 2005-04-14 07:58 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice! I like how it acknowledges the unexpectedness of his impulse. Why is he trying to save Veronica? Maybe he's not really sure, but he's going to do it, by God.

[identity profile] mistri.livejournal.com 2005-04-14 07:59 am (UTC)(link)
This is my newest ship, and it's got off the ground so quickly, too! yay :)

(although I really, *really* hope Logan didn't do either the rape or the murder)

[identity profile] sylver-one.livejournal.com 2005-04-14 09:55 am (UTC)(link)
what a great drabble :)

I have to say that kiss really got me puzzled, I never saw them as an item until this ep

[identity profile] shattered.livejournal.com 2005-04-14 12:04 pm (UTC)(link)
You really capture Logan’s urgency as he’s trying to save VM. I really enjoyed this!

[identity profile] fairy-tale-echo.livejournal.com 2005-04-14 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Hoorah! You're playing! It makes me all a-squee, I tell you.

I loved this, as usual with everything you write. I love that Logan's train of thought here, because it's just a little confused and still very determined. Really the heart of what appeals to me in his character in general. This character? You got him. :)

he would be damned if he lost someone else.

Perfection! <3