I loved it! This was great, especially considering you wrote it in fifteen minutes. Jack can sometimes really get on my nerves, but I like this Jack. He seems .. normal. He's thinking about the 'problem', but not angsting over it and beating himself up. And Sawyer is just, well, perfectly Sawyer. Except more naked than usual. :)
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Date: 2005-09-06 04:53 pm (UTC)Hehe, you said 'cock'. *is five year old* XD